My first attempt at Self Portraiture - C&C welcome

[CorrieMichael]

 

[tirediron]

Not bad at all; I'd suggest cropping to portrait.

 

[theeph]

I might consider changing the background a bit, it is a little too close to your skin tone, I think.

 

[Josh66]

Not bad at all; I'd suggest cropping to portrait.

Or square.

edit

Something like this:

 

[Derrel]

Nice lighting pattern. Good eye sparkle, good skintone rendering, good engagement with the camera's eye. I'm not 100 percent sold on the position of the front shoulder...looks a wee bit scrunched up...I wish this had been shot as a tall. Cropping it doesn't quite work. I tried rotating the image 25 degrees CCW, but then the front shoulder looked weird. Selfies can be very,very difficult to shoot.

 

[DCerezo]

Great shot...