Number 2, is not the waste of film you think it is, yeah, it's not what you where looking at but there is something about it that just screams to me. I like it despite the shortcommings you feel it has.
Number 7, is absolutely stunning in my oppinion, I really like the soft focus for this one, and I always love the shots where the model is not staring down the camera. A beautiful candid to my eyes.
Number 11, I like that one, I'd call that wall material.
Number 17, Definate wall material, not my wall but, I can see that on the wall of nice milkshake parlor or whatnot.
Number 21, Nice shot, a little over exposed but nothing major. The view is nothing special only because you knew it before you shot it, taken for granted because of family history. Some times it's what we take for granted that other people like the most.
There are a few others in there I would definately call keepers, but these are the ones that had they come out of my camera would have gotten priority. exelent job.