My first official shoot...

[pab]

So for as long as I could remember, photography was just a hobby to me. I finally took the leap recently and decided during career changes it was worth trying to take it up a notch.


Had a young couple who got married a year ago to the exact day of the shoot and wanted photos. Met them at a nice little winery near their home and here are a few photos from the shoot. Let me know what you think! Thanks

 

[Designer]

Did the couple like these?

 

[tirediron]

Oh look... railroad tracks!



A nice enough set; they seem slightly under-exposed to me ('though it may be this monitor).

 

[PhotoWrangler]

My only nit pick is the hands in the third photo. I don't like couples to hold hands with fingers interlaced because it looks weird. Other than that, nicely done.

 

[pab]

Not sure yet, giving them to them today? Shall I be concerned?

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[PhotoWrangler]

And his facial expression in the second jumping photo looks misdirected. He seems to a bit excited over her lady parts. I'd scrap that one.

 

[pab]

Oh look... railroad tracks!



A nice enough set; they seem slightly under-exposed to me ('though it may be this monitor).

Haha I know it was their request. I was taking photos in the grape vines and apple trees. Have about 65 photos total to give

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[kay1547]

I like the black and white the most, looks almost like the same pose at the last photo but a lot closer or cropped, works better, to me the train tracks is the song you heard one to many times. I agree lose the 2nd jump.
the watermark is WOW in your face

 

[pab]

The water mark is only for posting online

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[pab]

I like the black and white the most, looks almost like the same pose at the last photo but a lot closer or cropped, works better, to me the train tracks is the song you heard one to many times. I agree lose the 2nd jump.
the watermark is WOW in your face

Thanks for the reply.

 

[Designer]

Not sure yet, giving them to them today? Shall I be concerned?

We can't see the lady's face in several of your shots.

My biggest criticism.