My First Photoshoot in DSLR .

[prasanjit_shome]

Hello All,
can you please let me know what mistakes are there on the photos or areas of enhancement/improvement.


Thanks ,

Prasanjit

 

[tirediron]

I think the first mistake is that your photos aren't showing.

 

[prasanjit_shome]

@tirediron : Yes correct .. it is now there

 

[tirediron]

One of the great things about art of any type is that no can actually say that you made a mistake. Overall, this is a nice, solid set of images, but with some areas which, IMO, could be improved.


In the hawk image, I would suggest cropping away 1/2 of the RH side; the empty space doesn't add anything, and since the subject (the bird) is essentially vertical, a vertical composition would be better. The bridge/walkway.... High contrast and shallow DoF leave the viewer without anything to actually look at. The scene has great leading lines, but they need to lead to something.

The bridge/landscape is a nice image. The composition works well, it has nice colours and the elements work well together. The last image has very nice colours as well, and I quite like, but the horizon desperately needs to be levelled.