My First Post

[Christhaa]

my series of Ashley in Black & White

Photo1:

Photo2:
This picture looks crooked, but it is not the fence / wall runs around.

Photo3:
The wall seems askew but its because the wall is round.

 

[daveroberts]

I like the first and last one. i think there is too much sun on her face in the middle photo casting shadows on her face and causing her to almost squint with her right eye. Pretty model. looking forward to seeing more of your work

Thanks
Dave

 

[play18now]

I agree with Dave on the critique of #2. #3 is my favorite. The posing is really good and made for a rather striking picture.

 

[MLCIII]

Yeah nice. 3 is my fav except for her super dark eyebrows distracting me from her gorgeous everything else.

 

[Gavjenks]

Seconded on the eyebrows. In need of some dodging.

 

[DanOstergren30 5]

They're good images I think, but in my opinion the contrast is too high. In the first image I feel that the bright areas dominate the shot too much and clash too much with the darks. In the second image it's the opposite; I feel that the shadows are too dark and result in a big loss of detail in those dark areas, and the model seems to blend in with the rest of the dark areas. I will be honest and say I don't like the processing in the third image; I feel that it's overdone on the curves/levels, creating way too much contrast between the light and dark tones. In my opinion subtle editing makes a much stronger impression on a photo than one that has been heavily edited, and I feel that this one suffers from too much editing. And those eyebrows definitely need some toning down as well. Just as I feel with editing, makeup that is subtle is far more effective than makeup that over-compensates like this, and it looks like her eyebrows have been filled in too much.

Just my opinion, you don't have to agree.