My niece

[TOTA]

This is my niece.she feels very bored because I spend alot of time until I shot her... hahaha

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your comments are welcome

 

[The_Traveler]

Tota,

thank you for the note and the invitation.
While this picture is reasonably well exposed and very sharp I think there are two problems with it.
1) There is a yellow cast to the picture, which can be fixed.
2) Her bored expression doesn't give much life to the picture, and because you are so close there is nothing around her to give any context to it.

I have included a picture where I have changed the color balance so you can judge how it looks.
Perhaps a picture that included more of her and her body language that shows boredom would be more successful.
Thank you for the opportunity to look at this picture.

Lew

 

[pixilstudio]

+1

 

[TOTA]

Tota,

thank you for the note and the invitation.
While this picture is reasonably well exposed and very sharp I think there are two problems with it.
1) There is a yellow cast to the picture, which can be fixed.
2) Her bored expression doesn't give much life to the picture, and because you are so close there is nothing around her to give any context to it.

I have included a picture where I have changed the color balance so you can judge how it looks.
Perhaps a picture that included more of her and her body language that shows boredom would be more successful.
Thank you for the opportunity to look at this picture.

Lew

Thank you soooooooo much .I find your comment very useful for me. I'll put these notes in my mind while I am shotting.

 

[TOTA]

Thanks alot Pixilstudio