photong
Typo Queen
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- Aug 7, 2003
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I was never a fan of hair lights unless the person had dark hair on a dark background. I think it's fine. But it might be more professional (there's a line you have to watch for. But as I always say, do whatever the client (interview/employer, art director, model, photo editor) wants, even if the client is yourself) to have more light on the hair.
I like the lightning in both. Again, good stuff!
The posses are good too. The second one's hands sort of bother me. It's not exactly feminine (see her left hand thumb is sticking out? It makes it looks like that's her only finger. try it like the right hand, but make both hand poses more symmetrical, know what I'm trying to explain?). The crease/bump in her shirt bothers me. That's me. I'm picky but not a perfectionist.
I worked in a small crappy cheap family portrait studio and theres ll these things I learnt to pick up on (mostly with poses), and Im glad that I begin to see them more now and I can pick up other things in my work.
I like the lightning in both. Again, good stuff!
The posses are good too. The second one's hands sort of bother me. It's not exactly feminine (see her left hand thumb is sticking out? It makes it looks like that's her only finger. try it like the right hand, but make both hand poses more symmetrical, know what I'm trying to explain?). The crease/bump in her shirt bothers me. That's me. I'm picky but not a perfectionist.
I worked in a small crappy cheap family portrait studio and theres ll these things I learnt to pick up on (mostly with poses), and Im glad that I begin to see them more now and I can pick up other things in my work.