my try at portrait C&C welcome

[cardonalj]

so i went with my friend and tried to get her to let me do some shots of her. these were one of the only ones I liked. The first one I actually dont have the RAW file (i used her camera to take it). First one I liked because of the whiteout of the background. but just looking for some C&C (sorry for the wordy post)

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[simo110]

the first and second are overexposed I think..the last one, I like alot =)