My Wife - Practice

CRUMB · May 6, 2007

My 3.2 Meg old school camera.

elle · May 6, 2007

That's a really nice shot, but what happened to her pupils??

Could just be my screen, but they look green?

lasershot · May 6, 2007

Thats pretty good! Her pupils are a little wacky thoguh...

Nice job for a 3.2 meg camera lol

DRodgers · May 6, 2007

elle said:
That's a really nice shot, but what happened to her pupils??

Could just be my screen, but they look green?

mine shows green as well ...

I really like the image though.

justphotos · May 6, 2007

i agree with lasershot. that's a really good picture for 3.2. her pupils, though, maybe it was supposed to look that way, but they look like jelly or something. lol. very beautiful shot, though. you have a nice looking wife

Trenton Romulox · May 6, 2007

Yeah, them is some effed pupils HAHA.
But regardless, that is a very nice shot. Great work.

nabero · May 6, 2007

I agree about the eyes....also the hand coming up is a little off to me. looks like she's about to punch herself in the jaw. I like the lighting and the coloring (but not the selective coloring in the eyes).

cheers

RedDevilUK · May 6, 2007

Great shot, just to see, i put the photo in PS and turned the whole thing grey scale....and the eyes look alot better.

nice pose though, very well done

Puscas · May 6, 2007

nabero said:
...also the hand coming up is a little off to me. looks like she's about to punch herself in the jaw. .

I agree. Maybe you were going for the agressive pose, but this really looks like she's about to punch herself.
but a very pretty model and a good try! :thumbup:

pascal

xfloggingkylex · May 7, 2007

looks like selective coloring gone wrong. if in fact thats what happened, make sure you "erase" the color from the pupils. Nice shot.

CRUMB · May 7, 2007

Thnx for the critique, I rushed the PS when I shouldn't have. I had a great subject, but rushed the tweeking. Will do better in the future, promise. The puplis, great call. Thnx everyone, I'll step it up next round

C