Need some CC

[twoboysnmygirl]

2 is very good if the paw wasnt clipping the frame.

3 is one of the best but I wouodnt have centered the blossom, and would have in turn cut off a little of the branches on the right.

4 I dont like the framing, mainly around the chin with the mouth being so close to the frame edge.

5 has a nice tone and provokes curuosity to the viewer as to what in fact was going on. I assume some dancing?

6 is another bad example of selective coloring, no offense, unless she is pregnant. Why would you want my eye drawn to her waste in a mirror above? The model is very pretty and the attention should be drawn to her.

The last one and first one are alright but dont really do anything for me. You are good on your focus tgough.

Thanks for the C&C!

I can see what you mean about #3, makes sense.

Yes, in #5 they were doing a dance out in front of a dance studio during a fair on mainstreet.

She actually IS pregnant in #6, and I don't usually do selective coloring, but in this instance, the dress was only red in that area of the dress and I was just wanting a different POV. I did give her the shot in regular B&W and color as well!

 

[NikonNewbie]

I think you're really good at focusing! I have to admit, I thought her arm said, "I reek" and I was really wondering why it wasn't cloned out or something. Overall, I say well done!

I thought it said J Reese or something...**** I think I'd better get my eyes ckd! after you said it says "I rock" I thought...thats awesome...you captured her spirit and her self value...to me that means a lot especially when it's in regards to child because it feels good to a parent to know your children are feeling self worth.
I'm sorry..I'm a bit sentimental especially around the Holidays......this time of year I get sad. lol

 

[lildlege1]

I like number 3 and 5. Very nice pictures!!!!

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Thank you everyone!

Nikon, now you are making me feel all sentimental. Stop it!

 

[jamesdavidboro]

Hope you don't mind but i straightened no5 up and had a little mess around with it...

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Hope you don't mind but i straightened no5 up and had a little mess around with it...

That looks great! :thumbup:

 

[12sndsgood]

i like 4 and 5 myself. 6 i think is a nice shot but the red pulls me to the mirror instead of looking at the bride.

 

[samfarrell]

WOW how talented are YOU!!!! am new and know nothing lol so sorry i cant give u knowledgeable C&C but your work is fantastic!!! love the cat picture, and the bridal shot particularly. I do alot of wedding makeups etc as i work in the makeup industry so see alot of these type of shots etc and this is really original.
Keep up the good work lol

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Thank you very much!

 

[Sebastian Riel Ph.]

#5 Is pretty snazy. Reminds me of Alberta.

 

[point-&-shoot]

5 and 6 are the best IMO. very nice.

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Thanks!

I really appreciate the C&C I've gotten on this thread, it has helped me look closer at the details of my shots!

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Oh and for those of you that were not fans of the selective color on my bride, I think maybe the shot would be good just B&W. I went back and looked at the original shot and that vase is green and the color shot just doesn't focus on the bride and the mirror the way I wanted.

 

[twoboysnmygirl]

Here's the shot with some more PP...

I took out the vases, although I'm not very good that that sort of PP in Capture NX2, so you can tell if you know it was there.