New snaps with my new flash :).

[DoshKel]

Finally got an external flash. Here are my new snaps from a bar last night. Love the flash. Thanks for any advice/C&C.

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(this picture was not shot by me. I don't claim credit )

 

[92sir]

looks good what kinda of flash did u get?

 

[DoshKel]

Thanks . I got the Promaster 7500DX. Was gonna go with the 580ex, but decided on this because of the price and how similar it is to the 580.

 

[realitycheck3907]

Looks good, makes it look like daylight coming through a window.

 

[J.Bat]

These are nice, did you adjust the settings at all?

 

[manaheim]

First pic is solid, but needs to be brightened up a bit. Bump the contrast, too.

Second pic is *really* nice. The light is great. What did you do? Bounce it off a wall to the left there? I might have taken it with the guy a little less centered- more to the left. Other than that, though...

Third pic is ok, but you cut off her chin which is a bit weird.

I wouldn't even try to claim credit for the 4th.

 

[DoshKel]

Thanks for the C&C manaheim. I am kinda of disappointed with the first one too, because he is such a cool subject. I got one of his whole body, and he is covered in tattoos. Very fun.

Second I pointed the flash straight up and put my hand behind it. Thanks for the kind words .

3rd I was a little drunker than I wanted to be. I didn't mean to cut her face off haha.

I did take the 4th heh. But it's that last one that is not my shot. I really like the last shot though .

Jbat: These were all taken with an f/ 1.8 and 1/60 on M. ISO was either 400 or 800.

RealityCheck: Thank you.

 

[Teknik]

those are some nice shots

 

[momofthing1and2]

these look great!

 

[DoshKel]

Thanks guys.