New to Manual shooting - How's this?

[My2Loves04and06]

To me the photo looks good, but I'm an untrained eye. C&C, please!

 

[dEARlEADER]

Exposure wise it looks good... maybe some lost highlights in the background but barely relevant...

Personally I don't care for how the picture is cropped... specifically the fingers that are cut off... but if this was your intent than party on!

 

[My2Loves04and06]

Exposure wise it looks good... maybe some lost highlights in the background but barely relevant...

Personally I don't care for how the picture is cropped... specifically the fingers that are cut off... but if this was your intent than party on!

Thanks for the insight. Sadly, there was no cropping done. Just a bad central focus apparently!

 

[christopher walrath]

Not bad central focus. Just placement of yourself in relation to the subject. Zoom out or stand back to include a little more of your subject when necessary and vice versa.

IMHO, I think the darling subject blows away any further adjustment by the pilot. I love it. I think it's great! Yours? Who's? Details please. Don't leave us hanging.