New to this! C&C Please

[ANRM]

These have not been edited. I am very new to this so be gentle

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[investmenttechnology]

I personally think the depth of field is too deep. my opinion is nothing though.

 

[Rosshole]

Some fill light on her face would be preferable. I suggest a reflector to help you use the sun as a key light.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. Let me guess, you just read about the "Rule" of Thirds? Remember that it's only a guideline at best. When shooting portraits, the portratit orientation (Vertical) is usually best. Here you've got a great deal of unused space image left, and have cropped the subject off at the knees. Additionally, the subject requires fill light for proper exposure.

2. As per #1 for composition and lighting. Notice the severe 'racoon' eyes the girl has and the blown highlights on her crown. This is a result of shooting a backlit subject without supplemental lighting. A reflector, something as simple as a large piece of white posterboard would have helped a great deal.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John