New Triple (semi NWS)

Erik McCormick · Apr 9, 2010

Just wanted to share this photo. I know there are a couple things I might change, but overall we were both pleased with the photo(s).

The Shoe · Apr 9, 2010

I would be pleased with them, too. I like how the mood with the colouring from left to right goes from sombre to bright, and then she's smiling. It all just flows.

Misfitlimp · Apr 9, 2010

with a model like that Id be pretty pleased also. The far right one is my Favorite.

artoledo · Apr 9, 2010

Great Pics!!!

scorpion_tyr · Apr 9, 2010

Nice set! It flows very nicely

Johnboy2978 · Apr 9, 2010

This is pretty nice. My only nitpick is the lighting at the very left edge of pic 2 and 3 that there's a hard shadow. I'd prefer a nice gradual gradient there instead of the sudden change. Otherwise, my favorite is the second in terms of saturation and lighting but with the pose of #3.

cnutco · Apr 9, 2010

This set really works!
Thanks!

JimmyO · Apr 9, 2010

REally lovin this except for the bright band of light on the left side of the 3rd shot

BuZzZeRkEr · Apr 10, 2010

JimmyO said:
REally lovin this except for the bright band of light on the left side of the 3rd shot

Exactly! Great shots, the band of light on the 3rd is too distracting.....super easy 5 minute fix in photoshop though...just extend the shadow. Bravo!

Erik McCormick · Apr 11, 2010

Yeah, I too noticed that bright "band" (it's actually an OOF wall edge closer to the camera). I'd say that and also the fact that the first photo has the model taking up more of the frame. But I appreciate the comments and critical eyes you all have! Thanks again!

GeneralBenson · Apr 12, 2010

I really like the triptych form and the way it flows. Great idea!

PerfectlyFlawed · Apr 12, 2010

STUNNING! shes gorgeous!

And I love the order of the shots... Great job!

Dominantly · Apr 12, 2010

Well played sir

Ifocus4u · Apr 12, 2010

My fav is the middle image. I like the feeling that I don't know what she is thinking and the desaturation gives her a softer more natural look to me. The B&W is also a killer shot. Well done.

manaheim · Apr 12, 2010

omg people stop doing the little technical nit-pick thing.

It's a very creative series with an interesting idea executed very nicely.

I swear some people would comment on a dot of paint being out of alignment on the Mona Lisa.