New, what do you think?

[D3Shooter]

Wanted to get opinions on my work. So let me have it good and bad!

 

[Designer]

#1 underexposed, gathered dress is not flattering, horizon tilted, too much sky, nothing to indicate what the model is looking at, or why she is so unhappy.
#2 model looking to the short end of the frame, watermark has prominance
#3 cute pose, underexposed a tad, too much sky, vignet doesn't help, maybe this shot should have been in landscape format, losing the trees and sky.

 

[D3Shooter]

Just the kind of response I was looking for, thank you!

 

[Parker219]

^ This.( What designer said ) Plus in #3 it is supposed to look natural and not staged, yet the look on her face is like "am I doing this right" since she is looking at the camera.

 

[D3Shooter]

^ This.( What designer said ) Plus in #3 it is supposed to look natural and not staged, yet the look on her face is like "am I doing this right" since she is looking at the camera.

I'll never admit this again, but just before the shot a boat hit the dock I was on and she was laughing like crazy at me. Not that that justifies a staged pose, just a funny behind the scene moment.

 

[Jaemie]

#1 underexposed, gathered dress is not flattering, horizon tilted, too much sky, nothing to indicate what the model is looking at, or why she is so unhappy.
#2 model looking to the short end of the frame, watermark has prominance
#3 cute pose, underexposed a tad, too much sky, vignet doesn't help, maybe this shot should have been in landscape format, losing the trees and sky.

Yes.

 

[KmH]

Just the kind of response I was looking for, thank you!

Then you posted in an inappropriate forum section.

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[Tee]

Not a fan of the heavy vignetting.

 

[amolitor]

I think the exposure in #1 is appropriate and shows off the dress quite nicely. It's evening, after all. Tilted horizon is bad in this case, but I can't quite imaging what's going on here. Is she leaning way back or something? Fixing the horizon will surely ruin her.

#2 is quite unflattering to her, and selective color is definitely a pet peeve of mine. I will say that I almost didn't notice it, so this is maybe a good usage of it. Looking out of frame is something everyone says is a bad idea, but I am not so sure. This is the second one I've seen recently where it didn't actually bother me much. Mostly, though, her expression isn't something she's likely to be happy with.

I kind of like #3. Cliched, obviously staged. So what? The vignette is too much, and I wish her boots were more visually separated from her jacket, tonally or whatever.

 

[cayto]

Tudo o que foi dito, reforçando o uso excessivo de vignetting. :thumbup:

 

[AMOMENT]

Selective color can be risky but you did very smoothly...I like it! I know vignetting can be cheesy and there is a fine line..but I personally think it gave these photos great edge!!! The first is a little undersposed and I know this was intentional but I think personally I would have loved to see her skin a little more luminous. 3 is a winner! I LOVE IT!!!!!