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[HostileM6]

Hey guys. I'm new on this forum, mainly because all the other ones i was on never critiqued my work so it got frustrating. Hopefully this is a bit better. I've had my Rebel XS since xmas so bare with me, but dont go easy. I want to get better.

 

[teneighty23]

nice Mazda! and i really like your Pond picture, such nice dark blacks. im no pro so i will leave critiques for others.

 

[bwlergh]

Hi there and welcome to the forum.

1. You have too much negative space above and below the car and not enough on the right. I'd also adjust the levels a bit and bring out those whites and light greys. You need to play a bit with your angles and lighting, if a light is too dark on one side, walk around.

2. Makes me drool. Spectacular angle.

3. Composition is great. Your centre alignment and rotation are a bit off. The wheel on the right hand side is shot slightly lower than the one on the left.

4. There are a few sparkly hot spots above the mirror.

You inspired me to go out and try shooting a car

 

[HostileM6]

Hi there and welcome to the forum.

1. You have too much negative space above and below the car and not enough on the right. I'd also adjust the levels a bit and bring out those whites and light greys. You need to play a bit with your angles and lighting, if a light is too dark on one side, walk around.

2. Makes me drool. Spectacular angle.

3. Composition is great. Your centre alignment and rotation are a bit off. The wheel on the right hand side is shot slightly lower than the one on the left.

4. There are a few sparkly hot spots above the mirror.

You inspired me to go out and try shooting a car

thanks for the C&C.
as for number three, it looks that way because of the two different wheel sizes and profiles of the tires. at least that would be my logical answer but i could be wrong.

number 4, those were xmas lights on my house, didnt think much of em, nor did i notice them.

thanks again.