Newborn first attempt. C&C please

[juicegoose]

Ive only briefly looked at one of the poses from my first attempt at newborn. Overall it looks like the photos came out well and experience was nice. I particulary like this image but i can't help but feel like it missing something. Hopefully someone with better eye then me can help.
I did edit the image a little in post to soften up the skin. Adjust the wb slightly and add a little sharpness.

Thanks for the C&C

 

[sscarmack]

Aweeeeeeeeeee, too precious!

I'd like to see more of my babies face not covered up, and more 'in the lap' of the stuffed animal.

But this is very nice.

 

[juicegoose]

Yes i got caught up in the cuteness of the scene and missed the blanket over the mouth.