I find it hard to critique these images because it just looks like your shooting randomly. Put some thought into what your shooting and when you post asking for comments give us what you thought about the image, what you see wrong and then we can go from there. Its really hard to critique something when its three random objects.
I am not trying to be a douche either, I am serious I personally found I grew a lot more when I said what I intended the purpose of the picture to be, what I found wrong with it and then see what others have to say. Keep reading your manual, focus on composition and keep posting. Thank you for sharing and welcome to TPF.