Opinions, please

[EchoingWhisper]

I think the color one would be nicer if you darken the shadows and midtones while keeping the luminosity of the highlights.

 

[RobDingwall]

Thanks, Michael. I'll give it a try.

 

[EchoingWhisper]

Thanks, Michael. I'll give it a try.

No problem.

 

[RobDingwall]

I've done some of the things recommended by Paulanton - this is the result -