Derrel, I would love for you to point out the technical flaws for me so that I can learn to correct them
Mostly blown highlights and excessively compressed scene dynamic range; those are the two flaws I see in multiple shots. Perhaps a different, well-calibrated monitor and controlled work-location lighting would help even out your overall, total processing technical level. Like,
on the redheaded senior girl, the shot where her head is touching the wall is excellent! But, the two others that follow, and especially the seated pose on the tailgate of the pickup, have less-than-good renderings of the scene and the subject...her hair is totally blown-out, and the shot is washed out in the tailgate shot...the last shot of her, leaning on the back of the truck, with the totes and the color-coordinating blue steel gate in the background is a GOOD, solid pose! VERY well-posed! Flattering to her, and it shows agriculture/cannery/orchard background with the totes, and the well-painted old truck is a classic and it coordinates with her dress! Buuuuut...the lighting is not handled as well as maybe it could be with say, a BIG reflector bumping up the face-side to closer to the background light's level, so the light doesn't blow out so much. Same with the little girl's cute sheepskin vest--blow-out from intense side/back-lighting. As I said, these are much better than MANY people are charging for these days.