People

[Village Idiot]

That's just about as generic a title as you could get. .

 

[Braineack]

I'd boost the shadows and vibrance just a tad.

Otherwise, I think the people get in the way of an intersting shot. Thier pose just isn't doing it for me.

 

[pjaye]

They look like they want to be anywhere but there.

 

[Judobreaker]

Hmm... How about beings?
Or better yet... Entities!
People is so defined...

 

[tirediron]

Yes. Yes, they are.

 

[Garasaki]

I feel like the scale of the people is off compared to the rest of the components of the scene.

It seems to diminish their presence, which adds to the un-enthusiastic vibe they are giving off.

 

[Village Idiot]

This was their modeling faces. This shoot was from a shoot for a local charity/fashion show put on by local people with non-model models as the...models... So it was like pulling teeth to get anything out of them. It's also dark too. I think anyways. Looks dark on my work monitor but it's a crappy one.

The reason I posted a nearly 2 year old photo? I finally got some software that's way better than Photo Shop's photomerge and put together a Brenizer photo. I want to shoot one this weekend of my bike. Can't wait for that.