Phoenicorn's journey

[phoenicorn]

Hi all I'm Christian Sparrow and I am looking for some pointers on improving my technique.

I will post more soon. Thanks for your time.

 

[Dylan-Fishman]

Nice colors and all but I don't really know what I should look at? It's a nice picture but I see a few things you could work on. What camera are you using?
What you could work on

PP (post processing)- If you have photoshop, use it. Your clouds look a little soft and so does the whole picture.

You're a tad out of focus.

Have a focal point and guess what??? Focus on it! Landscape like this doesn't *need* a focal point but It should have something that pops.
What's good!

You used the rule of thirds nicely.

The picture has great colors

Maybe something like this?

All I did was adjust some colors and contrast

 

[Dylan-Fishman]

So you added another one.

This picture would be very good if you play with it in photoshop or gimp. Boost some colors and get that constrast up a wee bit.

 

[phoenicorn]

Made some mods like you suggested