This is the photo I've been trying to work with. I felt like it had potential but I'm not sure. The girls were twisting up the swings then spinning and I kept getting the back of her, and with a slow shutter speed I was happy that this didn't have so much blur. Its just candid shots for their grandma but still, my artistic and creative side wants to make more than just a snapshot and I was very involved with the camera settings but kept missing the mark as far as getting a forward facing photo. So any advice on this? Thanks.
I don't think it works. I don't think that it is clear enough as to what is going on at first glance. Not enough to warrant having your subject's back turned to the camera. I saw a shot in a magazine or book or somewhere recently that had a little boy sitting next to what appeared to be a middle aged woman on a dock looking out at a pond. Nothing overly unique going on, but it immediately conveyed a sense of emotion. You not only had the serene pond which struck the viewer, but you also had this clear sort of personal moment between what I would assume is a Mother and son.
The only way I could see this pic working, is if you atleast got the side of the face alittle to show some sort of emotion ( ie. the joy of playing on the swing ). If she was turned just a little more, you would also get more of a cross view of the swing she is sitting on which would make it much more identifiable. Then if you show a slight bit of motion to indicate that she was twisting the swing, it would have been perfect. You definately don't want the girl facing straight on the camera. You want that sense of spinning and excitement, as if the camera is a fly buzzing around. Personally, I don't think this shot has potential, however, the setup and overall theme has tons of potential. Stop wasting time on this shot and try to set up another time to shoot it again. This is all just my opinion though.
As for Bitter's shot, it works because of the lines and shape of the shot. Its not about the people. The people are just there to lend reference to what you are looking at. The angle does help create a sort of different perspective than your typical shot as well, but if you didn't have the interesting aspects in the scene, then the angle just makes the photographer look overly pretentious. I am also a big fan of the "Silver" style B&W.