I could see her adding to the story if you could actually see her, and she was interacting with the scene. Instead, you can barely make out her face in what looks like an awkward pose. I know the story being told here.
I think the images as landscapes are interesting. She caught some beautiful light under the tree. Decdent seperation of the green ones. Nice curved line from the shore. Leading line from the bright field or possible road behind the tree to the right.
The composition here is quite nice. It is a pretty landscape spoiled by an oddball element that doesn't work. Being in line with the tree trunk doesn't help matters.
Frankly, I would really like to see the actual portrait shots from this session. The location looks great. I want to see how it was utilized.
[edit] I cloned it out, and it looks much better. It also works well in black and white. I can't post them them though, so you'll just have to imagine. :roll:[/edit]