Please C&C this portrait.

Maxxam71

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Hello Guys, I am looking for tips for better shooting and editing,
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thank you :)
 

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I quite like this. I think you've done a good job with the lighting and processing (is that one of those multi-LED shop lights?) and the expression works well. My only very minor nit is that I'd like to see a little more detail in his hair.
 

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The photo is nice, perhaps a little bit of noise reduction? The face looks a bit digital.
 

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I dig it. Amazing shot!

Things I like:

-The composition and the completely black background
-The look that he is sweating, or at least I think I see it....how cool would it be to have him drenched in sweat?!
-It's hard to tell if this look is one of fear or apprehension...I dig it

Things I don't like:

-Short list here....I'd like it a bit brighter with a touch high contrast...(this falls into the preference category)

great job!!!
 
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Thanks for the feedback Guys I really appreciate it, and answering the question made by Tirediron, it was a single led of my cellphone in a bathroom. Btw, I am the guy haha
 

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Great job, I really love it! :)
 

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