please comment constructive critizisim is appreciated thanks....

[Dcrymes84]

Please comment on my picture of my sister laying out in her pool

 

[Keopele19]

the left side of her face looks blue, maybe some lens flare? if you are going for a portrait, tighten in up a bit - i don't want to see the truck and all that inflatable pool. Maybe crop it so it's just her, the tree and sky - keeping as much house and pool out as possible.

Now Criticize my post from about 10 min ago.

Thanks,
Jeff