PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS PHOTO!!!!

MichaelRuconich · Oct 24, 2011

HELLO EVERYONE I WAS WONDERING IF YOU COULD HELP ME? I TOOK THIS PHOTO AND I AM RELATIVELY NEW TO PHOTOGRAPHY AND I WAS WONDERING WHAT YOU MIGHT THINK..THANKS FOR YOUR TIME

DSC_0442 by MichaelRuconich, on Flickr

EIngerson · Oct 24, 2011

STOP YELLING AT US!!!!!!!

I would straighten the verticle lines.

pathoulihan1 · Oct 24, 2011

I'm a little confused, are the decals a part of post processing (looks like it to me), if so I don't think I get them. If they're not please correct me, but I would like the shot a lot more either way without the designs so if they're a part of the scene then it's unfortunate, just my opinion.

I think I would've cropped out about a third from the top (make it more personal). I like the overall composition, the person (especially the face) next to an ascending staircase gives it a very sad feeling.

Bitter Jeweler · Oct 24, 2011

ITS CROOKED, BUT AWESOME.

LizardKing · Oct 24, 2011

Hey! Great picture of a great song!
As they already told you, it's tilted.

CooProductions · Oct 25, 2011

Yeah it's a little crooked and I would have cropped a tiny bit of the right side to get the railing out of there and the top maybe 1/3 of the stairs. Otherwise I think it's a great photo. I felt my mood shift a little bit. Nice work!

MichaelRuconich · Oct 25, 2011

Thank you all help. That's the original I will try and play with it when I get a chance.

ang1995 · Oct 25, 2011

I like it! I would just straighten it out a little.

jwbryson1 · Oct 25, 2011

I'm not sure what the others see in this photo but it does nothing for me. Sorry.

mishele · Oct 25, 2011

Did anyone tell you to straighten it yet? lol

Very nice find. I love the words on the steps!!

Scuba · Oct 25, 2011

obviously straighten it up as this has been said. But I would also crop it so that decals at the very top were removed from the image. They are distracting to the rest of the image. Also, maybe increase the brightness/exposure just a tad. I like the pic though.