please critique this photo

[christen2484]

Nikon D60, 50mm, aperture priority, white balance cloudy, ISO 400, f5.6ish. I love her eye peeking out. She's got that shy 2 year old personality

 

[michael9000000]

I think the photo might have the potential to be stunningly beautiful, but the pink bar with the watermark and the white border take up WAY TOO MUCH space and really ruin the whole image in my humble opinion... Can we see just the photo?

 

[christen2484]

I just quick uploaded this one from my facebook page....the client copy obviously doesn't have the bar/watermark....I'm on my laptop, original is on desktop....too lazy to get up! lol