please critique

[Jimmy The Bat]

90% of my pics are of my daughters, This camera has already givin us some great memorys of them,But I would definatly apreciate any advise that will help me get better.

 

[kineard]

Good use of DOF.
Heavy on the shadow under the chin

 

[robertwsimpson]

she shadow on her eyes is very distracting. Try to have her looking up next time.... or use your popup flash for some fill.

also, the photo could use some contrast, and it's underexposed.

 

[JeffieLove]

There are definitely some heavy shadows here that take away from the picture... I think it also would have been awesome if you had gotten the pinwheel in focus as well

Just my $.02

 

[Jimmy The Bat]

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