Portrait of a Woman (not nude..but in bra)

[mrshaleyberg]

Hi,
I'm new here, and I'm a beginner photographer. I've been taking pictures of people in my house, or on location, and I need lots of C&C and information! This is a girl I did pictures of the other day, and I wanted to hear some feedback.

Thanks so much!
Haley

 

[Seekwence]

Cool idea, but for me it's too much saturation. Almost looks like the bra was drawn on in MS Paint.

 

[Robin Usagani]

It looks like it was a black bra that he changed to red. Not a clean Photoshop.

 

[mrshaleyberg]

#1 I'm not a "he"
#2 I didn't use photoshop to do the black and white/color

Maybe I should have just kept the rose colored?

 

[Derrel]

Holy Oversaturated Red Channel, Batman!!!!!

 

[mrshaleyberg]

This is the original

 

[JasonLambert]

This is the original

Now THAT one I like! :thumbup:

 

[thirdkid]

full colour is alot better..for the half b&w i reckon u need to desaturate it a little..the red is toooooo strong

 

[anuarD]

sorry for my broken english~ & i'm just newbie

"would be better if focus at her eyes then shoulder... :blushing:"

 

[Robin Usagani]

Ahhh. You need to do better job selecting the non red. Your first pic had some black spot on the side of the bra.

 

[skieur]

sorry for my broken english~ & i'm just newbie

"would be better if focus at her eyes then shoulder... :blushing:"

+! :thumbup:

skieur

 

[mwcfarms]

Nice shot of a beautiful girl. Love the color one. The black and white color select doesnt do anything for me anymore.

 

[Billhyco]

how about all b&w, i think i would like that. but for what you have posted here, the color one is MUCH better.

 

[Fedaykin]

Original is better. You went overboard with the saturation on the red. I'd say skip the selective coloring, but that is just subjective taste.

 

[Sebastian Riel Ph.]

My suggestion is to go bw that's it. Also there is severe jpeg artifact's on her forearm I'm kinda surprised no one else mentioned it, huh. I haven't checked your exif data, but if you can shoot in raw instead of jpg I would do that pronto