Portrait

[kapaah]

Hi all,

What do you think about this photo, regarding composition and editing?

Thank you all for your time.

Cheers.

 

[k5MOW]

I really like it. I think you did a great job. I love how you did the composition. Keep in mind I am very new let's wait for some more experienced photographers to come in.

Roger

 

[tirediron]

I like the way you've handled the exposure and the DoF control here, but there are several points which I think could be improved upon. I'm not overly fond of the crop; the bit of head and left upper-arm that are missing give me the impression that a mistake has been made. There are wayyy too many fly-away hairs around her face, and something as simple as a "finger-comb" just before the shot would have really improved things. Lastly, I think the angle of the head is just a bit too extreme.

 

[kapaah]

Hi Tirediron, thanks for your words..
I'll try to remerber those things the next time I shoot a portrait