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GoM

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An attempt at portraits (I work at a portrait studio, yes, but we don't get to do aaaaanything with lights beyond nuking them with them). My roommate, Jason. Thoughts?

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the lighting is nice but i find the composition lacking, i think it would work better if i could see more of his face, it annoys me that part of his hoody is cut off.
 

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I adore it! I can't help but stare into his eyes!
the cropping\composition could be changed a tad bit, but rather than seeing more I would tend to crop it in tighter for even more of a headshot! In my opinion you NAILED that lighting!
 

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I think the hoody is part of your friends personality, which you can see very clearly in this picture. The eyes are nice.
 

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12st off..Amazing eyes and you captured the essence of his character. The exposure is spot-on. My only nit is the cut off hoodie on top and side.. The lighting is primo.!!
 

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