On your FB page, I would lose all of selective color, tilts, and I would double check WB and focus on almost everything. If you want to be a PRO.. only put up your best!
Did you add the DoF blur in post processing? I can't see the exif on my phone but this seems to be shot around 55mm and with that lens it's hard to get the DoF that shallow for my recollection. Lol
Yes the Blur was post proccess, i used the quick selection tool, and i used a Gaussian blur And idk, i actually like my selective color ones, And the white balance, ive noticed with facebook, the colors are some times off, and my Sharpness is lost. I think this has something to do with Format factory, when i convert from RAW to Jpeg. Or its facebook issues.