Nobody wants to ask the obvious question? How are the raindrops falling on your head if you are shooting through a window from the dry confines of indoors?
#2 has potential. To make more visually appealing, try having more of the raindrops in focus to really standout as the subject, particularly on the left side of the frame. There is a plane you have captured from the angle you shot this at and I see it leading me from the lower left to the upper right. The background blur is just about right and the processing you done adds to the feeling of dreariness.
You do realize that you don't have to wait on Mother Nature to create this kind of shot don't you? A lawn sprinkler provides an instant rain shower.