Reaching out

[HelloEurope]

What do you think of the photos?
They were taken on a non profit organization "Youth Mill" which I'm currently working as a partnership of my project Hello Europe, you can check out more here!

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[tirediron]

To be honest, not a lot. There's no immediate story or purpose to the images and the framing & composition leaves a LOT to be desired, particularily in #3; WHY would you bisect the child's eye???? From your narrative, I think I understand the idea and the purpose, but I think you need to head back to the drawing-board.

 

[HelloEurope]

Thanks for your response. I understand your point but they were point and shoot shots, on the run, no preparation. Just to catch expressions, I didn't care about the framing and no story telling here, just photos and expressions.

 

[The_Traveler]

The expressions are the childrens'; the photos are yours.
The expressions are good, the photos are letting them down.