Redo the homework -- Commercie Ad (shoes)

[x-man]

I redo my homework. please comment it again! Thank a lot!

 

[shorty6049]

i think i like this one better than the other, feels a little dark to me though...

 

[Flash Harry]

If the shoes are the product why would you want to cover them up, get some legs inside of them n show em off. H

 

[glaston]

This is MUCH better than the previous work!!
This is homework if I remember right, not a finished product shot that a companies profits depend on.
So there's room to grow. No need for abso-perfection.

Putting feet in the shoes would be tricky.

If you don't use a close to perfect model for the feet, you run the risk of alienating the target demographic.
If you DO add feet, use a mannequin.

 

[x-man]

If the shoes are the product why would you want to cover them up, get some legs inside of them n show em off. H

Thank for your comment, why I am not get some legs inside because I can not found a good leg.

 

[x-man]

This is MUCH better than the previous work!!
This is homework if I remember right, not a finished product shot that a companies profits depend on.
So there's room to grow. No need for abso-perfection.

Putting feet in the shoes would be tricky.

If you don't use a close to perfect model for the feet, you run the risk of alienating the target demographic.
If you DO add feet, use a mannequin.

Thank your comment. I will try more hard work in my photos.

 

[frXnz kafka]

I feel like there is no focal point. My eyes don't know what to look at.