Rememberance Day Portraits

[Siphis]

Hello, i am kinda new to photography and my friend wanted me to do some portraits of him after remembrance day so i used my school studio for them. Feel free to C&C.

i also know some of the gloves and the faces are white washed, is there any way i can fix that? i kinda had trouble positioning the lights.

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