Resort

[ejbonagua]

Shot this at a beach resort. The foreground were kinda dark in the original shot because the sun was really bright. Tried alot of things in post and heres what i came up with.
I know it's not good but critiques please on what I can improve on

 

[mmaria]

you can straighten the horizon line for a start

 

[ejbonagua]

Oh haha forgot about that. Thanks

 

[ejbonagua]

bump

 

[timor]

Why don't you let your fantasy work a bit ? Picture like that, maybe technically correct doesn't strike with anything. Add some colour to it like this:

(just do that way, way better) and you will have much more presentable picture to show people. Remember, they react (general public) to two things: sharpness and colour.

 

[ejbonagua]

Why don't you let your fantasy work a bit ? Picture like that, maybe technically correct doesn't strike with anything. Add some colour to it like this:
View attachment 73778
(just do that way, way better) and you will have much more presentable picture to show people. Remember, they react (general public) to two things: sharpness and colour.

Thanks for the tip I'll keep that in mind.