My eye is pulled right to the woman with her baby - the brightness and color make her a dominant aspect of this composition, but she is so very small in the frame. My eye continues to scan the frame but I keep getting pulled back to her. When I try to take in the symmetry of the hallway the man's posture is - I don't know how to describe it. It just sucks the life out of the photo for me. I just want him to not be there. I see why you shot this. You have a good eye, but I don't think the photo gods were with you on this one.