Screen Press

[vipgraphx]

I was wanting to take an HDR image of some mechanical parts since I have done a lot of landscapes. I was in my screen room and thought this would be a cool image to test it on. I also brought down the F to 2.8 instead of F11 to get more depth of field and some bokeh (something I have not tried).


screen press HDRjpg by VIPGraphX, on Flickr

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

I would categorize this almost as an abstract. The screw is prominent and pops. The processing is clean. The color seems off a bit, white balance or perhaps saturation?

 

[Aragorncito]

My personal point of view the colors as Rotanimod mention are a little bit off, why don't you try to do a B/W HDR or hadle it by Zones as they are mostly metal objects.

 

[vipgraphx]

Yeah I turned down the saturation and it was taken under 5 fluorescent lights on the ceiling. We need it bright in the screen printing room.I never thought about being abstract bit that's a good way of lookIng at it. Sorry I post so much just trying to develop those skills.

 

[Aragorncito]

You may also try to play with the ilumination give it more volume .....

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

If you're shooting under fluorescent I'm guessing it is a WB problem.

It just occurred to me that you have a lot harsh light on this image and not as many shadows to give it definition and depth. Can you mess with the lighting and reshoot?