Some are way under exposed, white balance is all over the place, naked arm pits are very unappealing, way to many photos for detailed C&C, work on presentation by putting at least one carriage return between each photo.
I recommend posting no more than 1 at a time for C&C.
Nice shots but agree with KmH that some are underexposed. Make sure the background is set to two stops over the model - also ensure the iso in the light meter is the same as on your camera. This is usually an error most people make - me included.