Senior Session

[Brinr]

Great location, very pretty girl, fantastic light and even better weather. One or more strobes, natural light, etc. Nothing too special. Let me know what you think.

#1


9_11_11 Kevyn Senior Pics 007 by Brinr, on Flickr

#2


9_11_11 Kevyn Senior Pics 024 by Brinr, on Flickr

#3


9_11_11 Kevyn Senior Pics 062 by Brinr, on Flickr

#4


9_11_11 Kevyn Senior Pics 077 by Brinr, on Flickr

#5


9_11_11 Kevyn Senior Pics 058 by Brinr, on Flickr

 

[cnutco]

Looking at this on my phone so I will have to look again later, but at the moment, I can't get past that logo!

 

[tirediron]

I think that #1 is at least a full stop over-exposed; you've blown the shirt, her hair highlights and teeth. Don't like the crop in #2; it looks awkward and unnatural. Good exposure though. #3 needs fill light image left around the eyes. 4 & 5 are nice, but as a general rule, the watermark should not overpower the subject of the image.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[DiskoJoe]

Looking at this on my phone so I will have to look again later, but at the moment, I can't get past that logo!

i had the same feeling. 3 and 5 are good as is. I like 2 but you should have panned out a bit more

 

[Brinr]

thanks for all the comments, they're appreciated. As for the logo I guess you're all probably right, I put these on my facebook site with the hopes of her friends seeing the images, liking them, and then immediately knowing who did them and hopefully calling me. Maybe they're still a little big.