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Brinr

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Looking at this on my phone so I will have to look again later, but at the moment, I can't get past that logo!
 
I think that #1 is at least a full stop over-exposed; you've blown the shirt, her hair highlights and teeth. Don't like the crop in #2; it looks awkward and unnatural. Good exposure though. #3 needs fill light image left around the eyes. 4 & 5 are nice, but as a general rule, the watermark should not overpower the subject of the image.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John
 
Looking at this on my phone so I will have to look again later, but at the moment, I can't get past that logo!

i had the same feeling. 3 and 5 are good as is. I like 2 but you should have panned out a bit more
 
thanks for all the comments, they're appreciated. As for the logo I guess you're all probably right, I put these on my facebook site with the hopes of her friends seeing the images, liking them, and then immediately knowing who did them and hopefully calling me. Maybe they're still a little big.
 

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