Series of shots from today. C&C please

TylerF · Mar 16, 2010

Got the chance to be out of the house today and got some nice photos (at least i think) c&c welcome

Aayria · Mar 16, 2010

#3 and #8 are my favorite! I love how you made the texture really pop in these, and the angles in #3 are great ( to my eye at least.) Good job!

TylerF · Mar 16, 2010

thank you! i had a bit of fun taking these. me and a friend were in an olddd barn lol. the ones with the big circles are taken from the bottom of a silo pretty creepy too lol

Aayria · Mar 16, 2010

TylerF said:
thank you! i had a bit of fun taking these. me and a friend were in an olddd barn lol. the ones with the big circles are taken from the bottom of a silo pretty creepy too lol

You did a wonderful job of turning what was probably a dirty, old, somewhat ugly/creepy barn into some creative and intriguing shots. One of the things I love about photography- the ability to take the mundane, things people my overlook, and turn it into something amazing just by viewing it with a creative eye

TylerF · Mar 16, 2010

mhm! thanks for the compliments

SrBiscuit · Mar 16, 2010

love the gears composition, but it is underexposed...id like to see it with exposure bumped up and maybe some levels and contrast play. :thumbup:

nice series.

TylerF · Mar 16, 2010

Thanks, I did quite a bit of pp on it and that's the best I could get it with a quick fix up. But I agree its a little too dark

redtippmann · Mar 16, 2010

Great job with lines on #1!
#2 cant really tell what the subject is. I think its the spider web but for all of it to be in focus you would need a higher f/stop.
#3 has some great colors and nice lighting.
#4-7 need a little more work on composition.
#8 is a good pic. But maybe keep the vignetting down a little more.