Shot of a model

[Bukitimah]

C C most welcomed

 

[JohnTrav]

Too tight. Idk if it's just because I am using my phone or not. But it looks like the very too of her head is cut off

 

[ronlane]

I think it works. I'm drawn to the face, which is really sharp and don't really notice the head being cut off.

 

[Designer]

I appears to me that the frame is designed to showcase your watermark.

 

[tirediron]

It's a nice shot, but I would suggest either cropping more of the top of her head off so that it appears deliberate or none at all. Right now it looks more like a compositional oversight than anything.

 

[The_Traveler]

She is over on one side so that there's lots of space behind her and yet her head is clipped.
It looks like a missed composition.
May I show you how I would reframe this?