SearchingForElysium
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- Feb 28, 2017
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Basically my first time doing genuine street photography. Shot all on my Nikkor 50mm 1.8. I have my own critiques below. Not sure if people do that around here, but I probably will be doing that often.
Wish I was just a touch closer for this one. Would've made the DoF a touch more shallow, and the people on the left wouldn't be as distracting. I think they help frame the girl a bit, and serves to give you an idea of who she's smiling (would you call that a smile?) at. Kept the crop a bit wide to keep the shot airy.
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/
Also wish I was closer for this one, again for the DoF. Would've been a little awkward though. I tried to bring more focus to her, attempted to blur the people behind, though LR doesn't seem to work well for that. I'm not sure if the framing works, she's kind of looking off into nothing, but what do you guys think?
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/
Really like this one, personally. Maybe I should've moved to the left and got a lower angle, to catch what he's looking at, but it is what it is. His girlfriend is a bit hidden too.
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/
Wish I was just a touch closer for this one. Would've made the DoF a touch more shallow, and the people on the left wouldn't be as distracting. I think they help frame the girl a bit, and serves to give you an idea of who she's smiling (would you call that a smile?) at. Kept the crop a bit wide to keep the shot airy.
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/
Also wish I was closer for this one, again for the DoF. Would've been a little awkward though. I tried to bring more focus to her, attempted to blur the people behind, though LR doesn't seem to work well for that. I'm not sure if the framing works, she's kind of looking off into nothing, but what do you guys think?
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/
Really like this one, personally. Maybe I should've moved to the left and got a lower angle, to catch what he's looking at, but it is what it is. His girlfriend is a bit hidden too.
https://www.flickr.com/photos/phototac0/