Okay, so you were going for a comic-book kind of feel. :thumbup: In that respect, I think you've succeeded nicely. I really love your over-the-top look here. The contrast of the black and red really plays well. I like the added noise for effect.
Not sure I like whatever is coming out of the right side of her face there, but it's not terribly distracting. And I like the tight crop. Overall, it's interesting to view.