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eleganteye

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Sharing an image of a model in the studio. Lighting was umbrellas on background as well as umbrellas on the model.

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Being a bit picky: you cut her off at the wrists and the right side of her face (her right) between the eye and the ear might benefit from lightening a little.
Apart from that I like everything about it. Good looking model, natural, relaxed pose and (in case no-one else noticed that, too) a lovely smile. :thumbsup:
 
For those with more experience, correct me if I'm wrong, but I see a couple things here I'd work on...

1. Don't have her face the camera dead-on (square), particularly where she appears to be pretty busty... not a complimentary position for women. Have her turn her body slightly.

2. She appears to be a little hunched at the shoulders- not uncommon for busty women, particularly if they're a little self-conscious about it (though that shirt does not read "self conscious" to me (yow)). Watch your subject's posture.

Something in the positioning of the head, too... I think. Not sure.
 
I so have boob envy right now.
 
Those are fairly epic.
 

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