Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by shortpballer, Sep 3, 2009.
Took these on the beach in Hawaii. Let me know what you guys think.
i love their expression and connection in #1. #2 i cant decide just yet. am kinda leaning to thinking they'd be better a bit further away, but i really enjoy the hand holding and closeness.
I had a whole bunch farther away. But I felt like it was about them, and not the scenery. So I chose the closer ones because it accentuates them...
maybe the scenery shouldnt be so pretty then as i cant help but wonder whats behind his head
but hey...at least your horizon is straight heh heh
in all seriousness though i like them, but they seem to contrast. i focus 100% on them in the first one, but in the 2nd i see them but my focus is more on the background, and the foot prints in the sand.
is it me, or does it look like her foot is chopped off in #1
Good job on #1.
I'm assuming you used flash for #2? If so do you think you could have underexposed the ambient a bit more to get more color in the sky? The composition of this photo bothers me but I don't know why. Either the angle of the distance, not sure which.
his head looks fuzzy to me in #2
Yes I used a flash. The angle could be whats bothering you considering I was using shooting at 12mm... so it makes them both look a little distorted and "taller"
I like both,good job! did you do a silhouette on #2 pose?may be too cliché but i think it would have made a good shot
I think I did do a silhoutte of the second one but it looked a little too cliche like you said...
#1 is beautiful, very good job!
Thank you I really like their expressions in #1. I think it tells the viewer that they really are happy not just posing...
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