Some film shots. Critique needed!

[romeomeo]

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[paulk_68]

Looks like you are off to a great start.

#1) Does not do much for me, probably because of my age.

#2) I like this shot a lot. Some might say that it is a little overexposed or that it is lacking contrast, but I think it works in this shot. When photographing people, keep more space in the direction that they are looking... if they are looking to the left leave more space between them and the left side of the frame. I think this image would look better as a vertical crop, you can crop it as a vertical and get rid of most of the empty white square on her right.

#3) I like as is, nice shot.

 

[Bakko]

great shots, i liked film pictures a lot more then digital.

 

[romeomeo]

#2) I like this shot a lot. Some might say that it is a little overexposed or that it is lacking contrast, but I think it works in this shot. When photographing people, keep more space in the direction that they are looking... if they are looking to the left leave more space between them and the left side of the frame. I think this image would look better as a vertical crop, you can crop it as a vertical and get rid of most of the empty white square on her right.

Thanks, I'll definitely remember that.

Thanks Bakko!

More tips and advice would be awesome, I'd really love to improve.