Some new shots. C+C.

[Weaving Wax]

It's a little blown out by the window.

 

[Dylan-Fishman]

What Camera? What Lens?

#1- Nothing is in focus and there is some noise. A very shallow DoF should be replaced with a medium DoF.

#2- I like the lighting but your whites are blown out.

#3- It's blurry. This might be interesting if you apply the RoT's and get in focus.

Keep shooting, you'll get there.

<>Dylan<>

 

[Weaving Wax]

Thank you! I know the window in the second shot is blown out. As I stated. How would I get rid of blown out portions of my photos. How would I go about choosing a better aperture and shutter speed?